Representation feedback - You have covered the basics of representation, outlining what it is. However you need to go into more detail talking about why directors use stereotypes etc. I would also like to see some discussion of the stereotypes in your genre and to use so me clips or images to illustrate your point.
Genre research feedback - again you have covered the basics, with some detail.
In order to improve you should:
You have looked at equilibrium - but you have not mentioned the theorist who came up with this idea. Look into Todorov and add research about his narrative theory to your work.
Add some images to illustrate your points.
discuss the history of your genre.
This work is at a level 2 - the above will help you move into a safe 3 or even a 4.
No comments:
Post a Comment