Monday, 13 October 2014
Feedback - Miss Spencer
I can only see a little progress since my last feedback. I would like to see much more progress than this. Both of your analysis need the film opening to be embedded and screen shots that illustrate your points throughout. I am a little disappointed with your progress, and we will have a talk in the next lesson to discuss how we can ensure you don't fall behind in your work.
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I've uploaded my third textual analysis and added jpeg images to all of them, I may need to develop my writing further but I'd like to get all of my posts up before I do that. I've also got to do my horror convention research and put that up as and when I do it.
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